WALT listen to the noises of summer
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday 6 January 2021
Noises
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Hey Quinn,
ReplyDeleteYour summer sound story is really cool, I think you have a talent for storytelling. It’s really great in stories to share sights, and sounds and feelings to connect with the reader.
I can hear the sprawling cacophony of hundreds of seagulls and seabirds at the beach as I’ve heard them before many times and I think most kiwi’s know that sound perfectly too.
Great post Quinn,
See you later in the comments,
Daniel