WALT/I am learning to play football/soocer and become the best
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 16 October 2020
Football
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Hi Quinn
ReplyDeleteI think it's awesome that you and your brother want to be the best soccer players there has ever been. Maybe in your next blog reread the writing and add some punctuation. For a sport I play rugby it's fun to smash into people and to tackle people them. Do you and your brother play soccer for a sport?`