Wednesday 10 June 2020

Marking Correction

WALT use punction and correct it when the punction is wrong when we have writen something.

My favourite pet is hard to choose for me because there are so many options like cats, dogs, fish, puppies ( which turns into dogs when it's older). At home I have a cat and birds from all over that come to my house. It is fun having a pet at my house to cuddle and play with. She comes into my bed at night and cuddles up next to me and stays there normally to the morning. I love my cat although she has killed three birds, when she has killed the birds she has just been wanting to play with them.

It was hard tring to think of a least one way to start this paragraph and what to write in it
My home, Mr Gray making the Punction slide and me for making the paragraph
What your favourite pet? Why is it your favourite?

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