Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday 8 November 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi my name is Nevaeh from new Brighton catholic school
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you added a lot of information in your writing.
Did you know that if we had no sand dunes all the sand will all got to
the house,s back yard next to the beach.Maybe you can work on adding more punctuation.What did you enjoy about the sand dunes?
Hello Nevaeh. Thank you for the advice.I liked the sand dunes because they help us and it´s beautiful nature.Is there something you enjoy about sand dunes?
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